Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
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Title - What you will be explaining
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Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
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Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
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Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.
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Title
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My Role Model
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Introduction
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My Mum is a role model but to be honest she's actually more than a role model. She is a smile to my face when I am heartbroken and she is the light to me in the dusk.
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Information
1st element
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My Dad is the shield to my body. He is the hammer to the family. My Dad is a shine in a star. He is the security of the house, a powerful person it's like he is a beast.
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2nd element
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My Mum is a shooting star at night which brings good luck. She is a dream come true whenever I have a nightmare. She is there to stop an arrow from going into a heart. She brings day to night and brings flowers to nature.
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3rd element
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Together they make an ultimate, undefeatable, indestructible team. Together they are powerful they are there to stop a bullet.
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Conclusion
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They are my Role Models because they have been there my whole life and I'm also looking forward to being there for their lives.They also sacrifice their lives for me and I cannot wait to do that in return.
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By Tonga
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