My comment is a quality comment because I greeted them with Talofa lava. I complimented Room 7 on how realistic and how awesome their movie was on the big screen.
I am a learner at Glen Taylor School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 13 and my teachers are Mrs Faalili & Whaea Pene.
Thursday 16 November 2017
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Saturday 5 August 2017
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Saturday 1 July 2017
Why my Mum is my role model
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
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My Role Model
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My Mum is a role model but to be honest she's actually more than a role model. She is a smile to my face when I am heartbroken and she is the light to me in the dusk.
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My Dad is the shield to my body. He is the hammer to the family. My Dad is a shine in a star. He is the security of the house, a powerful person it's like he is a beast.
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My Mum is a shooting star at night which brings good luck. She is a dream come true whenever I have a nightmare. She is there to stop an arrow from going into a heart. She brings day to night and brings flowers to nature.
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Together they make an ultimate, undefeatable, indestructible team. Together they are powerful they are there to stop a bullet.
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They are my Role Models because they have been there my whole life and I'm also looking forward to being there for their lives.They also sacrifice their lives for me and I cannot wait to do that in return.
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By Tonga
Friday 30 June 2017
Bar graph maths star sighnes
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Sunday 25 June 2017
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Friday 2 June 2017
Tonga
My name is Tonga I am 11 years old. I go to Glen Taylor School. I have 5 other family members and I'm a proud Tongan in NZ. My Teacher is Miss Siale. As I learn my work gets harder but I don't give up. I enjoy sports, drawing, talking to friends, loving family, and making others laugh.
My biggest challenge is learning i think I need to improve more on it cause so far I'm not doing good. I'm trying my best though. I’m not proud of what i've done but I'm proud of what I've accomplished. My goals for this year again is focussing on my learning and showing respect with integrity.
I'm really looking forward to camp and Rainbows End when im year 8. I also look forward to challenging myself and achieving my goals. Something that inspires me is my family. Every time I fall down, they were there to catch me. When I would have a hard challenge, they would help and support me and they are always by my side to guide me and save me.
Friday 24 March 2017
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