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Thursday 16 November 2017

My favourite film festival movie

Screenshot 2017-11-16 at 10.12.56 AM.pngThe Time Machine by Room 7 at Point England School
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My comment is a quality comment because I greeted them with Talofa lava. I complimented Room 7 on how realistic and how awesome their movie was on the big screen.

Saturday 1 July 2017

Why my Mum is my role model

Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
My Role Model
Introduction
My Mum is a role model but to be honest she's actually more than a role model. She is a smile to my face when I am heartbroken and she is the light to me in the dusk.
Information
1st element
My Dad is the shield to my body. He is the hammer to the family. My Dad is a shine in a star. He is the security of the house, a powerful person it's like he is a beast.
Information
2nd element
My Mum is a shooting star at night which brings good luck. She is a dream come true whenever I have a nightmare. She is there to stop an arrow from going into a heart. She brings day to night and brings flowers to nature.
Information
3rd element
Together they make an ultimate, undefeatable, indestructible team. Together they are powerful they are there to stop a bullet.
Conclusion
They are my Role Models because they have been there my whole life and I'm also looking forward to being there for their lives.They also sacrifice their lives for me and I cannot wait to do that in return.

By Tonga

Friday 2 June 2017

Tonga

Jun 1, 2017 2:08:28 PM.jpgMy name is Tonga I am 11 years old. I go to Glen Taylor School. I have 5 other family members and I'm a proud Tongan in NZ. My Teacher is Miss Siale. As I learn my work gets harder but I don't give up. I enjoy sports, drawing, talking to friends, loving family, and making others laugh.


My biggest challenge is learning i think I need to improve more on it cause so far I'm not doing good. I'm trying my best though. I’m not proud of what i've done but I'm proud of what I've accomplished. My goals for this year again is focussing on my  learning and showing respect with integrity.

I'm really looking forward to camp and Rainbows End when im year 8. I also look forward to challenging myself and achieving my goals. Something that inspires me is my family. Every time I fall down, they were there to catch me. When I would have a hard challenge, they would help and support me and they are always by my side to guide me and save me.